The FIRST DRAFT... bum bum bum.

Well, here is the first draft of the story I was talking about. It's three and a half pages long, be warned .
( Farewell for Now )

And for those of you who should be editors, want to be editors, are editors, took a weird fancy to it or just want to give feedback...
( feedback ideas )

Something amusing

Thanks to tdj for The thirty least hot things you can say to a naked woman. Based on the thirty hottest things you can say to a naked woman. Read the hottest one first.
[maniacal, uncontrollable laughter]

Why can't I be evil too?

so sadly, by default...

You know, I've never been able to get more than 50% evil, even on my xanga. poohey.